i love seemingly excessive commas used as pauses in sentences.

i also love spoken word.

it makes me feel like chocolate wrapped in satin.
velvet smooth voices–gravelly and richtumbling out
pointed hesitationsdriving waves.
words falling like God’s rain drops:
soft whispers. heavy thuds.
drenched in meaning.
honesty and adjectives enveloping hearts like purple sunbeams and twirling skirts.
yum.

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